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Re: Ask a question here (or start a new topic!)
The blue X only exists when you want to erase a reivew.
Jan 1, 2009 -
Re: a new year's tale part 2
Hi, again! Okay, you still have a problem with your tenses: It is a wonderful day, New Year. It gave a sense that you are free in this world. No ...
Jan 1, 2009 -
Re: Ask a question here (or start a new topic!)
Can you erase your posts?
Jan 1, 2009 -
Re: Hanna's Holocaust; Part Two
Onto part two: I seemed to have grown up so much. Seem shouldn't be in the past tense. year 1934 I'm pretty sure you said it was 1933 in Part ...
Dec 31, 2008 -
Re: The Wikipedia game.
I found it, Lukas! Someone felt strongly enough about the last name Steinhardt to write about it...
Dec 31, 2008 -
Re: Greetings from Daydreams
*gasp* I love Nutella! Anyway, welcome to YWS. I read your story. You have great, great prose.
Dec 31, 2008 -
Re: The Wikipedia game.
I see no random article link!
Dec 31, 2008 -
Re: Hanna's Holocaust ; Part One
Kirsten beat me to the nit-picks! Oh, well. I guess I'll have to review plot. -The title is too cute. "Hanna's Holocaust". Lovely. Please change it. -She writes much too ...
Dec 31, 2008 -
Re: A new year's tale part 1
Hello, Fox! People will fill the streets yet the night was already decorated with different colours. Honestly, this sentence makes absolutely no sense. Actually this is the first time I ...
Dec 31, 2008 -
Re: Jetty - a WIP
I've never worked with photo shop, so I don't know how hard or easy it is... Oh well... Onto the review! The horse is pretty :) You did a good ...
Dec 31, 2008 -
Re: SAA: Sexually Abused Anonymous: A Memoir
First let me say i'm terribly sorry for happen to you. Good story, but a tad cliche. He did not just say that! It's non-fiction! It's not cliche! Adam, you ...
Dec 31, 2008 -
Re: Cociane is a hell of a hug (new excerpt)
Hey, Adam! I'm Sakura and I'll be your reviewer today. Lol. I come from a family of drunkards as well. My Uncle went to rehab and stayed in Eric Clapton's ...
Dec 31, 2008 -
Re: Flight-Prologue
Hello! I'm Sakura and I'll be your reviewer for today. Welcome to YWS. It's a great place to have your writing critiqued, so you should return the favor! It's a ...
Dec 31, 2008 -
Re: Job Explosion
Yes, we are all so purple-y now :) Oh, and blue :)
Dec 31, 2008 -
Re: Abortion
This is a little off topic, but does insurance cover birth? I can't imagine my mother shelling out 7000 bucks to have me. :)
Dec 31, 2008
